Mele - Writing - Recount Burger Model Planing

 Today  for Writing i planned out m Recount about something that happened in the weekend or any other week. What i planned out was my morning walk with my family, i hope you guys like my activity

and have a Great day!. Here is my Plan.

 

Mele - Holiday Recount Writing.

 This Week i have been working on my recount for the holidays. I wrote a recount on what i did in the holidays but there were many things i did but i went with the movies  my family and i went to watch the new fast and furious 9.I really like the new movie because there were a lot of cars and fighting, i hope you like my recount.

Comment below what you did for the Holidays??.

Here is my Writing.

In the holidays on the 23rd of July my family and I went to the movie theater in Sylvia Park to watch the new Fast and Furious 9. When we arrived at Sylvia Park it was a sunny day and we were all excited to watch the new Fast and Furious 9. We had to walk a long way to go up the escalator. When we went up it was so cool because there were a lot of movies that were playing. 

The first thing we did was go to the arcade. When we all went to the arcade, we were so delighted because there were a lot  of games and prizes to play and win. My cousin Paula went to the arcade and we won lollies. After that we played games with each other and we had the most fun ever. Finally we went and sat down and we talked about what we were getting from the snack area  and we all paired up and got one popcorn each and went to go get our drinks too. After that we went and paid for our tickets and entered the cinema.   

When we all entered the cinema, we didn’t know that we got front row seats. We sat down and when that movie started playing the screen was so gigantic. My favorite part of the movie was when Dom (the main character) was being attacked by a group of bad people and his brother who is John Cena who played Jacob, and then Dom found out that he was the leader of the very bad people and there was this bridge and Dom and his team was supposed to go over it. But then it broke and then Jacob with his  fast and bule car went over the cliff and then this plane came and then picked him up with strong magnets.

After that brillant movie we exited the cinema and we went and waited for my brother Sateki and my cousin Thomas because they went and wasted another movie. Finally they came back and we went home happy.

                                                                           The End        

 

Labour Weekend

 Today in class i have wrote my  labour weekend my labour weekend is about my sisters 18th birthday. I had fun writing about this. This piece of writing is recount. What did you do in you do for labour weekend?Here is my Recount.

On the 26 of October  on labour day it was my sister’s 18th birthday. I woke up at 10:00 and went and got ready for her birthday then my mum and whole family woke up and got ready. When I was finished getting ready to do my hair, we went and got the cake and cupcakes from my nana’s house and went to the cemetery.

When we arrived at the cemetery my nana came and then all my cousins came too and then my ants came then we prayed to god to wish my sister the best birthday that she can and wish my dad the best birthday too in heaven. When we finished we sang happy birthday to her and blew her candles on the cake and then we went back home.

When we were about to go home my nana stopped and called to get some food and she said “ get KFC” my mom said “ yeah sure” so we went and got KFC. When we got home and set up the two tenets and the decorations. The decorations were set up nicely and they set out the food and we sat down and said prayer  and ate the food.

When we finished eating we went to the park and played tag for a bit and then we played three games of basketball and then we went back home and showered and came back outside. We played some soccer games then we went inside and went to sleep. The End             

Time with Family.

 Today we have been writing about time with our family. I wrote about the time when  my family went to my cousins birthday. I had really fun going there and writing about it. You can share you thoughts in  the comments and what you think about my piece of writing  Here it is.

In the evening, on Monday  the 19th of october. My sisters,mum,dad,brothers,aunties, cousins and I celebrated one of my cousin's birthdays when she was turning 13 years old. My family and I got ready and hopped into the black car and went there.

After we got there we walked in and my aunt and cousin  were still setting up, so i went and played with all my cousins, then one of my cousins said “ let's go watch TV” so we went  and watched youtube.  After that i went and checked if they were done setting up and they were almost so i went back to watching youtube.

Later when they were finished and when i went it looked amazing there were balloons everywhere  the colors were pink and there was even a dessert table, and of course the cake was a chocolate cake and there was caramel inside.

Later sang happy birthday to her, and then she sliced the cake and the caramel came out and it came out slowly. Before eating we eat normal food, when we are finished eating we get some desserts. I got a brownie and a piece of chocolate. I didn’t have any cake because I was fuel.

Finally we packed the food that my aunt gave my family and we put it in the boot of the car we went home and we were so tired so we went to sleep. The End  

   

RainBow End - Times With friends - Recount Writing Trem 4

Today during class we had a recount writing test. This writing test is a recount and the topic was times with your friends so i picked when i went rainbow end with my two friends Sia and Tomas. I planed on a piece of paper  and wrote my story on my netbook. I really had fun writing this. Here is my piece of Writing.   

On Thursday the 1st of october my friends Sia, Tomas and I went to Rainbow End. We hopped in the red car that my aunty was going to dive,  she was the one that drove us, it took 20 minutes to get there. When we got there  we saw the huge sign that said ‘RainBow End.’ We took some picture’s there. I was really excited to go on all of the rides and see what new rides they have or not . We went inside and got our wristbands and we entered to see all of the rides.

The first thing that we did was we went on a ride the ride called  the Log Flume. The Log Flume goes on a  journey through the Enchanted Forest, and makes sure you are ready for the plunge at the end! When we went down I got wet but Sia, Tomas and I  still had fun.  The next thing that we did we went on another ride that was Gold Rush it goes through a haunted gold mine dodging with falling beams and we went on that ride and in the end there was this humorous explosion.

Later we were going to go on another ride but then i semlled hot chips and cotton candy so i asked Sia “ can we go get some hot chips and cotton candy” she said “ sure we can'' so we went and receive the hot chips and cotton candy we came by a table and we went and sat down and ate  our hot chips and cotton candy. After That  we went on another ride it was called the Power Surge the power surge goes  around and around and around and then it speeds up and speeds up again until you are up in the air sipping as fast as you can. I almost passed out on that ride, then we went on the Ivander the invader is a thrilling ride that’s sure to get you up! 

Finally  we had enough rides for today so we went back home showered and went to sleep. I loved  all of the rides that we went on. I even loved the food and the most thing I loved was hanging out with my friends. I would really love to go there again. The End