Positive ways
you can be a
soldier.
you can be a
soldier.
I will become a soldier because i will fight for
my county and help my teammates if they need
help i will get food for everyone if i can i will try
to gain skill so when we go to war i will fight and
get better and when battle i will get better when
it will rain and i will try my best to fight and help my
county.
my county and help my teammates if they need
help i will get food for everyone if i can i will try
to gain skill so when we go to war i will fight and
get better and when battle i will get better when
it will rain and i will try my best to fight and help my
county. 
Good Job Mele! It's me Arvay. I liked the way you you were really positive and how you explained how you would never give up. Maybe you could just explain a little bit more. Well anyways Keep going!
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you were thinking of others well being. You showed a fantastic attitude. Remember that you are a very important person and always use a capital I when you are writing about yourself.
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