Day 2 Diary Entry Term 2

Day 2: Digging Deep - Imagine you’re an officer at war. Write a diary entry about the events in the mess that night. Remember to include your thoughts and feelings as if you were at war!

How to write a diary entry:

1. Write the date, day and time, then start with ‘Dear Diary’ (as diary is like a friend).
2. Begin the entry with a general sentence describing the day or momentary feelings. 
3. In the body, you may discuss an event (in past tense), your feelings towards it (present tense). How it is likely to affect your future plans (future tense).
4. Conclude with a final comment and a future course of action

In 1918 Dear today i was good and happy. So i went to get my
suits, on and went where we had meetings, so the chief he said.
That we were going to war in a few weeks so we,  for trained days
we were all ready so we went to London, and no people was there so
we had, to stay and i felt miserable so i went to ,my tent and was
thinking what should  i do. I said to the chief  “ i want to get out of
this place he said “ l don’t care we have been, cleaning bathrooms so
stick with is” l had to do nothing to do so i said to all the soldiers “do
you guys want to be free” they shouted YES. So we were trying to
build ,a plan so we can fly out of here.  Finally it was fished almost
we just had add the seats for us and then we were fished so we
tested it fist so we could safe be so we flayed off with out the
chief knowing and we went were we wanted to. 

                                                           

From: Mele